Writing Don’ts Part 2

The Art of Effective Writing: What Not to Do

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Continuing from my previous article on Writing Don’ts, here are a few more things you should consider not doing when it comes to your writing.

1. Poor Transitions

Make sure your sentences and paragraphs naturally follow one another and don’t suddenly veer off. Poor transitions between these can disrupt the flow of the story and have your readers scratching their heads in confusion.

For example, here are some that don’t work

• Unexpected change of setting — The detective followed the suspect through the crowded streets of New York City. The suspect suddenly disappeared into the subway tunnels. The next morning, Sarah woke up to the sound of birds chirping in her suburban backyard.
• The sudden shift in character perspective — Mark stared at the painting for hours, lost in thought. He couldn’t help but wonder about the artist’s inspiration. The rain started to pour outside, and Susan decided to grab her umbrella before leaving.
• No logic — John had always been a science enthusiast. He loved stargazing and learning about the cosmos. He had a passion for astronomy. As a child, he once got lost in the forest, and now he was an accomplished astronaut.